Joshua, this is a thoughtful and subtle poem about your thoughts on war. I particularly like the way you have used some half rhymes e.g. lost / most. I am also impressed by your vocabulary e.g. your use of the word “acknowledge”. Overall, a mature response to the task – well done.
November 20, 2016 at 5:05 pm
Joshua, this is a thoughtful and subtle poem about your thoughts on war. I particularly like the way you have used some half rhymes e.g. lost / most. I am also impressed by your vocabulary e.g. your use of the word “acknowledge”. Overall, a mature response to the task – well done.